This term we have been learning how to write narratives. I hope you enjoy the story.
The big adventure
A long, long, long time ago. There
was a stampeding elephant. One day he found a mirror it was a gold mirror! He
accidentally ran into it and got teleported to the land of fire. He found an
injured bird. He healed it and helped it so they became best friends. They both
excitedly ran back into the mirror but got teleported into a desert! The
elephant said “look a giant snake!” So they ran as fast as they could. The
elephant and bird found a cave. The bird said “this cave won’t last long!” So
they ran to the end of the cave and found a passage. They had lots of time so
they stopped and then sneaked out. They found the mirror and jumped into it and
everything went back to normal.
The end.
By Curtis
Wow Curtis your story was very creative. I like the way you used some describing words.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Curtis I like all your excitng words like sneaked and stampeded extra.
ReplyDeleteWow cool story Curtis
ReplyDeleteCool story Curtis very creative!!!
ReplyDeletenice work Curtis!
ReplyDeletei love the story curtis
ReplyDeleteWow i love your story especially the idea of the magic mirror
ReplyDeleteWow i love your story Curtis. It looks like you put in a lot of effort.
ReplyDeleteNice story Curtis,I like your ending.
ReplyDeleteNice story I like how there is speaking parts
ReplyDeleteI like your story and I especially like the way you use the mirror to teleport the elephant and bird.
ReplyDeletewow Curtis,
ReplyDeletei really like your book it is really amazing
I like your story Curtis about the big adventure.
ReplyDeleteWow Curtis i like your story that you made it is awesome.Maybe you can make it a little longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGood work Curtis, Great work.
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Good work Curtis, Great story
ReplyDeleteGood work Curtis. Great story
ReplyDeleteawesome tory Curtis,looks like you learned lots!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work Curtis! I really like your story. It put an awesome, creative picture in my mind!
ReplyDeleteawesome work Curtis! i really like your story
ReplyDeleteWell done,
ReplyDeleteYour story was really interesting I really liked your character and the solution to the problem.
Great story Curtis you were very creative and it looked like you worked hard on it.
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